When the evening sun is setting,when from care my mind is free
when of someone special i'm thinking
my mind is filled with thee
One who streams the smile in me
one who paints to me art of dream
upon thy glimpse i forget to word
in the presence of thee i forget the world
Thy talks creates in me, laughter rush
thy passionate look covers me blush
although i talk and laugh in crowd
my soul is still with thee
Time is precious and time is essence
time spent with thee is worthy in every sense
colourful is the world and life is spice
when i see it through thy poetic eyes
Life with thee is a hopefull happy slide
it is a beautiful tale if thee by my side
make my life a magical melodius song
just clasp my hand and walk along
long, long and long
5 comments:
dearest yash...you have so artistically and beautifully spilled your thoughts..these thoughts form a dream of every girl..d personified emotion has been so wonderously expressed, that it gives me a feeling of reading d sequel of geetanjali.amazing kid!! simply superb..!!!
Its simply superb........ tis a true dream of true girls..........
Yellindaa debidyaaa???
very nicely written..liked it
It's a beautiful poem. but just answer who is that 'thee' ? well, I doubt how does a person like you can pen a poem with such a deep thought! hmm! keep writing such poems may be with an answer to my question?
with love
Prati
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